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#227 - 01/12/70 06:04 PM Untitled (for now)
lowrider4life
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How can you call yourself a freind
When you treet me like a trend
I try to be there for you
Especially when youre blue
When you see something new
You act like were threw
You don't even realize that I'm there
Just like the air
You throw me in the closet
And put on your new locket
I will be here wiating
Untill you are done dating
Ready to catch all of your tears
From all of those waisted years

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#228 - 01/12/70 06:04 PM Re: Untitled (for now)
mandy777
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for me it seems that you lost someone in this poem, of all the poems you wrote are good but i have to ask are you writing about someone particular in your life especially this untitled poem?
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#229 - 01/12/70 06:04 PM Re: Untitled (for now)
lowrider4life
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Well in this particular poem, yes I am talking about somone. A freind of mine that I was starting to get really close with well like closer and closer everyday. And that person seemed to be somone that I could tell anything. But now that person has met some new freinds like just from one night and now that person well lets just say the poem explains alot of it. I just hope that this person isn't leaking any of the things that I it. As for the other poems most of them are just me letting off steam or letting the world know how I feel in a weird sort of way.
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#230 - 01/12/70 06:04 PM Re: Untitled (for now)
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hey iam sorry about the way you are feeling and i been through the sam stuff. the best i can tell you is that sometimes friends let you down big time, at first they are nice to you and you feel that you can open up to them but when they meet new friends they dump you like trash. for me i wont worry about that friend because they are better friends out there and they are people who are willing to be your friend but you dont know until you search. remember when ever you meet a friend you should know what you tell that firend because when things turns sour the water begans to leek. think about what i said
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#231 - 01/12/70 06:04 PM Re: Untitled (for now)
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Well thank you very much for the advice!!!!! I will use it. I was in a car accident the other day and the doctor gave me some medicine and im kinda our of it so i wont say mcuch or something like that! I got to get some more of theese pills, j/k
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#232 - 01/12/70 06:05 PM Re: Untitled (for now)
mandy777
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there was one thing i forgot to mention when you say that you were getting close to the friend are you trying to say that you had feelings for that friend meaning that you like the person more than a friend if that is so then you should not let your feelings get in the way of friendship it cause a bad relationship especially for you . also i am sorry about your accident and i do understand the way you feel. i really enjoy reading your poems and iam looking forward to reading more of yours .
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