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#7406 - 10/02/05 09:12 PM More *****
icandi
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I've loved more deeply
lost more dearly
felt more strongly
fell more severely
tried harder
cried longer
wished more passionately
and hoped more eagerly.

I've loved with no return
lost with no relief
felt for no reason
fell with no support
tried with no accomplishment
cried with no conclusion
wished with no reservations
and hoped with no compensation.

the end
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#7407 - 10/02/05 10:53 PM Re: More [Re: icandi]
JamesXm
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Did you write that? It is really good.
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#7408 - 10/03/05 11:35 PM Re: More [Re: Bambino]
icandi
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Yea i did in my head on the way to sonic yesterday, thanks, glad you like it.
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#7409 - 10/04/05 01:23 PM Re: More [Re: icandi]
icandi
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I would like to officially replace the word "conclusion" with the word "consolation" cuz i like that better thanks!
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#7410 - 10/04/05 03:02 PM Re: More [Re: icandi]
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That is even better. I like poetry and such.
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#7411 - 11/12/05 01:36 PM Re: More [Re: icandi]
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Yea i did in my head on the way to sonic yesterday




whoa man. that's deep

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#7412 - 11/13/05 11:37 PM Re: More [Re: Junglist]
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ah cool. we have poets here, Go to www.poetry.com and check out Derek W. McDaniel
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